World Cup Comprehension

Rhosilli

Horton

Rotherslade

Broughton

Punctuation Pete Needs Your Help

 

Punctuation Pete is all in a pickle. He has written some sentences but Miss Walters has told him that they are not correct. Can you help him edit them?

 

• the dog ran in the park

• we went to the shop

• mycat likes milkandfish

• whatis your name

HOTS – Choose 2 sentences from above and improve them using 2AD.

 

 

• last week i goed swimmingwith my fried and it was fun

• i seen a big dog in the park it was running faster

• my mum buyed me a toyand I was reallyhappy

• who areyou speaking to said megan

• HOTS –

• 👉 Improve it in 3 ways:

• Replace weak vocabulary (e.g. “fun,” “good”)

• Add extra detail (adjectives, adverbs, time/place)

• Change the structure (add a clause or second sentence)

• Example:

• 👉 Yesterday, I went to the park and it was fun.

• ✅ Improved version:

• Yesterday afternoon, I went to the park with my friends, and it was incredibly exciting because we played a fast-paced game of football.

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