L.O: To improve and edit
Let's activate our prior knowledge!
What does an experienced editor do to make their writing better? What are the 5 main steps?
Beth wyt ti'n meddwl?
How could you improve this sentence?
Is there more than one issue?
Is there more than one way?
"I skipped up to the house excited about my training i was not going to knock the house down. I would feel bad."