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Llanrhidian Primary School

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Mrs A/Mr D: 5,4,3,2,1

Independent: Handwriting

Independent: Nessy/Reading Eggs

 

L.O: To proof read for spelling, punctuation and grammar, finding most of the errors. 

 

Things you might need to be a successful editor:

1. A highlighter

2. A dictionary 

3. A thesaurus 

 

 

 

The Edit!

 

 

 

Wyt ti wedi gorffen?

Create the next paragraph to the story. Try to make it exciting, using a variety of adjectives, verbs and adverbs. Pob Lwc!

 

 

 

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