LO: To read over my work to check for errors
LO: To read over my work and I am beginning to use a range of familiar strategies and tools to improve my writing
GRASP
LO: To explain where and why I have made changes or corrections to my writing
Can you design your own wizard?
LO: To include some simple detail in a text
LO: Uses appropriate adjectives and adverbs
Hook
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