L.O: To describe settings
L.O: To choose more exciting vocabulary
L.O: To use descriptive language and consider choice of words.
I wonder, what is it like at a fair ground?
Beth wyt ti'n meddwl?
Beth wyt ti'n meddwl?
Listen to the music and think about all 5 of your senses!
How many super sentences can you remember?
Can you spot any in the text below?
The Enchantment of the Fairground
Visiting a fairground for the first time is incredibly exciting, like stepping into a vibrant dream. The more I gazed, the more I marvelled at the twinkling lights of the ferris wheel, glowing like a giant Christmas tree against the night sky. Filled with joy, I could hear the cheerful melody of carnival music, which if it were a person, would invite me to lose myself in its delight. Slowly, as I ventured forward, my heart raced at the sight of the gigantic roller coaster, swaying in the wind like a ship upon a stormy sea—would I be brave enough to ride it? On the outside, I looked brave enough (but on the inside, my tummy danced and danced).
The sweet aroma of toffee apples wafted towards me, tantalising my taste buds and making my stomach rumble in eager anticipation. I could see a towering mountain of candy floss, its texture light and fluffy like a cloud—who could resist such a whimsical treat? Laughter erupted around me like fireworks, vibrant and infectious, as children surged towards the stalls, buzzing with excitement, eager to explore the plethora of games. If I could just hit the bullseye, if it just landed perfectly, then I would win the biggest teddy I had ever seen.
With a delicate toffee apple in my hand, red and glossy, I felt pure delight coursing through me. Each moment was alive with energy—the thrilling vibrations of the rides made the ground pulse beneath my feet. Sweet and tangy flavours burst on my tongue as I took my first bite, unleashing an exhilarating rush of joy on this enchanting adventure. If this day continues to unfold like this, then I hope it will never end…
Or listen to it...
Enchantment of a Fairground.mp3
Now read the text again, underline any words that you:
1. don't understand... we need to find out what they mean!!
2. think you can draw!
Tasc: Visualise your new words!
Create a word cloud using your new vocabulary!
Click here to go to website!
Activate prior knowledge... What does 'show not tell mean' in literacy? Beth wyt ti'n meddwl?
Heddiw, we will be making a connection between the Christmas show and 'Fayre, fair, fare...'.
Close your eyes and visualise moving up your body - zoom in on how your body is feeling.
Let's jot some ideas down, this is your planning time...
WAGOLL
New Recording 36.mp3
WAGOLL - Have a discussion about this piece of text. Use the sentence prompts below to discuss the vocabulary. Like some of the words? Pop them in the blank space on your placemat! Don't know the meaning? Look it up!!
Super Sentence Planning:
Using your placemat and your plan; write some sentences that will show the reader how you felt before your first performance in 'The Llion King'.
Amser ysgrifennu!
Quick Write:
Using your knowledge of super sentences, show not tell and your new vocabulary from yesterday. Write a paragraph showing how you felt before the first performance of The Llion King!
