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L.O: To reflect on, edit and redraft to improve the quality of their expressions and use of strategies to ensure greater clarity.



What strategies can we use to proof read?

Beth wyt ti'n meddwl?


What does successful author Tom Palmer say about editing? He does 4 things after writing a paragraph! Can you think what they might be?


Tom Palmer Creative Writing Tips : How to edit a short piece of writing

1. Write (already done!)

2. Add

3. Take away

4. Replace

5. Read aloud